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100 WC T4 W3

this is my 100 word challenge for term 4

Waking up not knowing what happened all she remembers of the last 3 days was that there was a car crash and the cause was unknown. How could her father do her like this! If it was her fathers fault. Until a familiar voice called from the distance it was her uncle? What! “So its you, you caused the crash” “ yes and no”. I ran as fast as I could run but fell into a ditch her uncle caught up quickly

Exhausted, breathing hard she raised her fists. But its too late “goodbye little girl” stab.

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Stuck 100WC T3 W9

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Here’s another 100 WC as I haven’t done one in a while

I’m stuck as stuck as stuck can be. I remember exactly how I got here let me tell you. It all started at my house my mum shouted “you better go get some milk for me from farmer joe or I’ll rip your neck off”. So I got up and got on my bike “why cant she do it herself!” I said in frustration. I started peddling as the sun beamed on my bike and made it shine like silver. But I wasn’t looking and there was a rock I tumbled right into this hay bail. And that’s how I got stuck.

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Dan 3

Historical facts

  • That you would get executed for desertion
  • That in the army you had to do hard labour
  • That a lieutenant had a lot of power
  • That the natives were very kind
  • That the lieutenants were very mean

I felt sorry for the dog so I gave it back to Waruwi but a soldier noticed me and forced me back to camp the lieutenant said I would be executed at dawn and that he didn’t have any choice. It was governors orders he really couldn’t do anything I was sad that I would get executed. The soldiers found a good place in the woods and then they started to make an execution point. They were going to shoot me it was stomach turning to think about it. I needed to think of a plan until Waruwi came she was holding a puppy I new she understands. I could give this to the governor and I wouldn’t get executed so I went to bed happy. The day of execution came they got me to the post and got there gun out lieutenant Roberts asked if I had any last words I responded with yes. I said that I didn’t steal the dog he looked like he would say dan this is not the time but I gave him the puppy. Give this to the governor good job dan he said and I didn’t get executed.

Complex sentences

We have been looking at complex sentences in class. A complex sentence is a sentence that has a dependent clause as well as a main clause. A main clause on its own is called a simple sentence.

 

We were given the following simple sentences based on the image below and I have turned them into complex sentences (with the dependent clause in italics.)

The men sat at the table. After giving the orders , the men sat at the table.
The men wore red coats. The men wore red coats because it kept them warm.
The men were feeling tired. After eating, the men were feeling tired.
The table was piled high with food. The table,Which was dirty, was piled high with food.
The weather was very hot today. After the storm, the weather was very hot today.